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Project Blueridge - Subject 7

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Entry for Werwriters contest. Part of a larger story that I hope to get written soon.

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Added a few things that people thought might help the story as well as re-wrote a few other parts.
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These short stories are good reads! I wrote something similar to this a few years ago where a guy woke up in an abandoned research facility in an old room, although that was with werewolves and psychics and the story went absolutely nowhere. It's very interesting to see the scientists in a more positive light, if you can call experimenting on unwilling subjects positive, but it's nice to see them not be 100% evil at least, makes them seem much more human in my opinion.

I liked how the journal worked as it detailed the mental deterioration of James. Describing that sort of thing is something I'm going to have to learn to do better myself and you seemed to do it quite well here.

I'm going to have to read more of this series later, definitely!